Dee! I accidentally deleted your crit of my first two pages! I'm so sorry. I read it and meant to hit "reply" but hit delete. Please don't think I did it on purpose or that I didn't like what you had to say.
A couple pages later, I set up the premise of the book. I added those first two pages later. Thanks so much for reading it and giving me your feedback. I'm really, really, really sorry I deleted it! I wish I could figure out how to get it back. But I do remember what you said, so I guess that's the important part.
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A couple pages later, I set up the premise of the book. I added those first two pages later. Thanks so much for reading it and giving me your feedback. I'm really, really, really sorry I deleted it! I wish I could figure out how to get it back. But I do remember what you said, so I guess that's the important part.